A Picture of My Dervish (Not a ScreenShot)

[Innoccence]

Ok well I just wanted to share another drawing of mine to get a few comments/suggestions/flames.

Here it is:
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r102/Innoccence/RayneAlishari.jpg

Not some of my better work... Sorry for the Fuzzy Scanner Scan, I've got to get a better one of those someday.
~Innoccence

[Mahomet The Templar]

My thoughts are...

1.) a bit more detail
2.) less lines that seem sketchy at the edges.

More of a pin and ink look and less like pencil sketches, plus high detail would be an imporvement IMO.

-Mahomet

ps: keep up the good drawings!

[ellioto_elementalist]

My thoughts are...

1.) a bit more detail
2.) less lines that seem sketchy at the edges.

More of a pin and ink look and less like pencil sketches, plus high detail would be an imporvement IMO.

-Mahomet


I appreciate that's constructive critisism bit in my opinion that's a little negative :? *

Well I think it's lovely.

* Just so I don't get loads of abuse like last time this is my opinion, I'm not trying to brainwash you.

[Innoccence]

XD Thank you both, I do agree with you though Mahomet, in the actual picture the lines don't look so sketchy so I have no clue why my computer is out to get my drawings, but it is.

And thank you once again Ellioto_Elementalist :D
~Innoccence